Question

据报道，在4月20日四川庐山地震中一个名叫高诗琴的女孩身受重伤后，处于极度的痛苦之中。国际红十字会(IRC)决定，每当她收到一封慰问信，就给她增加2美分的治疗款。假如你是她的加拿大笔友Peter，为了帮助她，请你用英文给她写一封慰问信，主要内容应包括

?自我简介

?得知的情况

?表示鼓励

?打算为她做什么

?祝她早日康复

注意：

1.信的格式已为你写好。

2.信中不得出现你的真实情况。

3.词数100左右。

4.请在答题卡上作答。

5.参考词汇：bitter(痛苦)  overcome（克服） recover（康复）

Dear Gao Shiqin,

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Yours sincerely,

Peter

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Gao Shiqin,

I am Peter, your pen friend from Canada. I am very sorry to have heard of your present situation that you are so bitter after you got seriously injured in the earthquake. At present, IRC has decided that it will give you two cents when you receive a letter. That will offer you so much courage. I hope you will make efforts to overcome all kinds of difficulty, no matter how hard it is. You are sure to make it. I will try my best to ask all my friends, schoolmates and relatives to write letters to you, which may help you. I do believe that you are brave enough to live on.

May you recover soon.

【解析】

试题分析：考查应用文中的书信的写作。同时也属于提纲类作文，要点都已经给出，审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，描述要点时要全面不要有遗漏，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用省略句，倒装句和强调句型准确表述。亮点有I hope you will make efforts to overcome all kinds of difficulty, no matter how hard it is.这句话里面有让步状语从句，还有I will try my best to ask all my friends, schoolmates and relatives to write letters to you, which may help you.这句话用了非限制性定语从句。

考点：考查提纲类短文写作。

点评：提纲类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。