Question

假定你是李华，你的笔友Jane最近总是感觉身体不适，因此写信向你询问如何保持健康。请你根据以下要点提示用英文给她回信。

要点提示：

1．合理饮食；

2．锻炼身体；

3．保证充足的睡眠，不要熬夜。

注意：

1．词数150左右（信的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Jane,

                                                                                

                                                                                

                                                                                

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

Possible version:

Dear Jane,

I’m very glad to receive your letter. But at the same time I’m sorry to hear that you are not very well these days. In your letter you asked me how to stay healthy. Here is my advice.

Firstly, you should keep a balanced diet. You should avoid eating food high in fat and too much sweet food. You’d better eat more fresh vegetables and fruits. Secondly, taking exercise every day helps build a strong body. Why not take more exercise in your spare time? As we all know, regular exercise is an important part of keeping us healthy. Finally, make sure you have enough sleep and you mustn’t stay up too late at night.

By eating properly and exercising regularly, you can keep your body at a proper weight and stay healthy. I truly hope my advice is helpful and you’ll get well soon.

Best wishes.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua  

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇信件，首先要认真阅读题目。假定你是李华，你的笔友Jane最近总是感觉身体不适，因此写信向你询问如何保持健康。请你根据以下要点提示用英文给她回信。要点提示：1．合理饮食；2．锻炼身体；3．保证充足的睡眠，不要熬夜。所以要用第一人称来写，且需要用一般现在时。需要写的内容、开头和结尾已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意题目要求词数150左右，写的字数不要太多，也不能太少。

考点：信件作文

点评：本文属于信件作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。