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5．增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（Λ），并在此符号下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词；
注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词．格式错误不得分．
I am Li Hua，a student from Xinhua Middle school．Not long ago I win the first prize in the English contest hold in our school．Here I'd like to share my English learning experiences with you．First，I find taking part in the English corner can of great help in learning English．In the English corner，I can talk free with my English teachers and classmates in English．However，I have been greatly improved my speaking English．Second，keeping a diary in English is my hobby and benefit a lot to my writing．Third，Enjoy Reading is a very useful website，where has many interesting English articles．By reading these articles I get a lot．

分析 本文主要介绍李华学习英语的经验：参加英语角，和老师，同学用英语自由交谈；用英语写日记；阅读Enjoy Reading网站上的英语文章．

解答 I am Li Hua，a student from Xinhua Middle school．Not long ago I win the first prize in the English contest hold in our school．Here I'd like to share my English learning experiences with you．First，I find taking part in the English corner can∧of great help in learning English．In the English corner，I can talk free with my English teachers and classmates in English．However，I have been greatly improved my speaking English．Second，keeping a diary in English is my hobby and benefit a lot to my writing．Third，Enjoy Reading is a very useful website，where has many interesting English articles．By reading these articles I get a lot．
详解：
1．win改为won 考查动词时态．根据句中时间状语Not long ago表示过去时间，用一般过去时态．
2．hold改为held 考查过去分词．contest与hold之间是动宾关系，用过去分词短语held in our school用定语修饰contest．
3．experiences改为experience 考查名词．experience意为"经验"，是不可数名词，没有复数形式．
4．can后加be 考查词语用法．分析句子结构，句中缺少谓语动词，can不能单独作谓语，后接动词原形，"be+of+抽象名词"构成的短语相当于be+该抽象名词的同根形容词．
5．free改为freely 考查副词．talk是动词，用副词修饰，形容词free的副词是freely．
6．However改为Therefore 考查副词．此处表示结果，而非转折，用副词Therefore．
7．去掉been 考查词语用法．此处improve是及物动词，表示主动，不用被动语态．
8．speaking改为spoken 考查过去分词．"英语口语"用英语表达是"spoken English"．
9．benefit改为benefits 考查主谓一致．benefit的主语keeping a diary是动名词，动名词作主语时，谓语动词用单数三人称，即benefits．
10．where改为which 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词是website，在从句中作主语，用关系代词which．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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