题目内容
14．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Playing basketball was once one of my dreams．Because of lack of practice and skills，I didn't do it very good in the beginning and was often laughing at by other students．Gradually，I lost confident and wanted to give up．But my teacher told me，"Nothing was easy．Struggle is a vital part of our life．"Heard that，I pushed myself harder and made a rapid progress．Eventually，I became one of the shooting guard in my school team．
From my experience，I've learned a lesson that it is struggle which leads us to success．As long as we work hard and never gave up．we are sure overcome whatever difficulties we're faced with．
分析 打篮球曾经是我的一个梦想，由于缺乏训练和技能，一开始我打得并不好，经常被其他同学嘲笑，慢慢地我失去了信心，想放弃，但是老师鼓励我继续下去，最终我成为校队的得分后卫．从这个经历中我得出：奋斗就能使我们走向成功，只有我们努力，不放弃，我们就一定能克服困难．
解答 Playing basketball was once one of my dreams．Because of lack of practice and skills，I didn't do it very good in the beginning and was often laughing at by other students．Gradually，I lost confident and wanted to give up．But my teacher told me，"Nothing was easy．Struggle is a vital part of our life．"Heard that，I pushed myself harder and made a rapid progress．Eventually，I became one of the shooting guard in my school team．
From my experience，I've learned a lesson that it is struggle which leads us to success．As long as we work hard and never gave up．we are sure∧overcome whatever difficulties we're faced with
详解：
1．good改为well；考查副词，这里需要修饰的是前面的动词do，故用副词形式well．
2．laughing改为laughed；考查动词的语态，分析句子结构，主语we与动词短语laugh at应该是一种被动关系，故用laughed与前面的was构成被动语态．
3．confident改为confidence；考查名词，这里用名词形式作lost的宾语．
4．was改为is；考查动词的时态，这句话陈述一个客观事实，故用一般现在时is．
5，Heard 改为Hearing；考查分词作状语，主语I与动词hear存在逻辑上的主谓关系，故此处用现在分词形式作状语．
6．去掉a；考查冠词，progress 意为"进步"，是不可数名词，前面不能用不定冠词，故去掉a．
7．guard改为guards；考查名词复数，one of 后面跟名词的复数形式表示一个范围．
8．which改为that；考查强调句，这是强调句结构"It is/was+被强调部分+that从句"，故which要改为that．
9．gave改为give；考查动词的时态，这里as long as 引导一个条件状语从句，陈述一个事实，要用一般现在时，故把gave改为give．
10．sure后面to；考查动词不定式，be sure to do 是固定搭配，意为"一定做某事，确定做"．
点评 短文改错首先通读全文，整体理解文章的大意，再分析句式结构，弄清句群关系，然后运用所掌握的词汇，语法句型等基本知识对短文加以分析，找出错误加以修改．
