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4．假设你叫李华，你从报纸上得知世界上8种熊中有6种面临灭绝的危险．你决定给世界野生生物基金会（WWF）写信反映这一情况，提出你的建议和希望．
注意：1．词数：100左右，信的开头和结尾已给 出，不计入总词数；
2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3．参考词汇：熊类bear species
☆濒危原因--人类活动：
1．熊的某些部位可以用作贵重的药物；2．栖息地遭到破坏．
☆建议：1．建立更多的保护区；2．立法禁猎熊类．
Dear Sir or Madam，
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   Please give a hand to the endangered bears．They need help to survive．
Yours sincerely
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Scientists say that humans are their biggest threat because some parts of bears are very expensive as medicine．科学家说人类是他们最大的威胁，因为熊身体的某些部位和药物一样贵重．
高分句型二：
To save bears，I think more reserves for bears should be set up so that they can live freely there．
为了拯救熊，我认为更多的保护区应该被修建起来，那样他们可以自由的生活．
句型一 ①that humans are their biggest threat 该句是一个由that引导的宾语从句，that在句中不作句子成分  ②because some parts of bears are very expensive as medicine．该句是一个由because引导的原因状语从句
句型二 ①To save bears 该部分为不定式位于句首作目的状语②so that they can live freely there 该句是一个由so that 引导的目的状语从句

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
I've learned from a newspaper that six of eight bear species in the worldare dying out．Scientists say that humans are their biggest threat because some parts of bears are very expensive as medicine．（高分句型一）That's one of the reasons why bears are often killed．In addition，many habitats of bears are being destroyed as a result of human activities，so bears are losing their homes．（灭绝原因）To save bears，I think more reserves for bears should be set up so that they can live freely there．（高分句型二）Laws should be passed to prevent people from killing bears．（提出建议）
Please give a hand to the endangered bears．They need help to survive．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

点评 该书面表达为提纲类，该类作文一般规定了考生的写作思路，罗列出了相应的写作要点．考生在平时应注意积累相应的词汇和短语，在写作时尽量做到将要点与主题紧密结合，用准确的、简洁明了的语言将作文展示出来．