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9．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．作文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
     2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear Nattawa，
I'm going to enjoy a tour in Thailand during the summer holiday with my families．The good news is that I have booked the air tickets from Thailand successfully．And out of my expectation，I was trying to book the train tickets on the website of Thailand Train Ticket while a notice caught my attention．It says that all the tickets had been full booked from July 20to August 28．Now I'm writing to you asking for a help．I wonder whether you are kind enough tell me how we can rent a vehicle in Thailand to ensure a self-driving trip．Surely，I'd appreciate you very much if you could be our guide．
Looking forward to hear from you soon．
Yours，
Li Hua．

分析 文章是一封作者写给朋友的求助信．作者暑假将要和家人一起去泰国旅游．作者在预订火车票的时候发现，7月20日到8月28日的火车票已经全部售完了．于是打算来一次泰国自驾游，但不知道怎样在泰国租车．于是写信询问他的朋友，并希望对方可以当自己的泰国导游．

解答 Dear Nattawa，
I'm going to enjoy a tour in Thailand during the summer holiday 
with my families．The good news is that I have booked the air tickets 
from Thailand successfully．And out of my expectation，I was trying 
to book the train tickets on the website of Thailand Train Ticket 
while a notice caught my attention．It says that all the tickets had been 
full booked from July 20to August 28．Now I'm writing to you asking 
for a help．I wonder whether you are kind enough∧tell me how we can 
rent a vehicle in Thailand to ensure a self-driving trip．Surely，I'd appreciate 
you very much if you could be our guide．
Looking forward to hear from you soon．
Yours，
Li Hua．
详解：
1．families改为family    考查集体名词   family指家，家人；families一般用来指很多家庭，或是强调家庭中的具体成员．此处指一家人，为整体，改为family．
2．from改为to 考查介词．form为"来自…"，后接来的地方；to为"去…，到…"，后接要去的地方．根据句意，这里指"要去泰国的机票"，改为to．
3．And改为But 考查连词．根据句意，此处指"出乎我意料的是，没有火车票了"，与前文为转折关系，用but．
4．while改为when 考查连词．从句中的"caught（catch） my attention"为短暂性动词，不能用while引导．while引导的从句中动词要为延续性动词．
5．says改为said 考查时态．从上一句"was trying""caught"可以确定，订票和看到通知这两个动作发生在过去，用一般过去时．says改为said．
6．full改为fully 考查副词．book为动词，预定，此处full为形容词，不能修饰动词，改为fully，副词修饰动词．
7．去掉a 考查冠词．help作名词时，表示"帮助"为可数名词；表示"有帮助的人或物"为不可数名词．此处表示"寻求帮助"，为不可数名词，去掉a．ask for help可作为固定词组，求助．
8．enough后加to 考查非谓语．形容词+enough+to do，足够…做某事．
9．you改为it 考查代词．appreciate后跟if引导的从句，要加上it，即appreciate it+if从句．
10．hear改为hearing 考查非谓语．look forward to，"期待…"，to为介词，介词后的动词要用doing形式．

点评 短文改错可采用三步法：（1）通读全文，了解全文大意和主题；　（2）找错并改正；　　（3）通读全文，核对检验．可特别留意名词的单复数，冠词，非谓语，形容词、副词、时态语态．

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删减：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
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