题目内容
假如你是李华,最近你从报纸上看到一家涉外酒店招聘暑期兼职工的广告,请你根据下列要点提示写一封应聘信。
1.李华,女,18岁,身体健康。
2.擅长英语,口语流利。
3.性格外向,交际能力强。
注意:
1.词数120左右。
2.书信格式已经给出,不计入总词数。
3.可以适当拓展。
Dear Sir or Madame,
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Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Sir or Madame,
I am writing in response to your advertisement in the newspaper. My name is Li Hua and I am 18 years old. I think I will be fit for the job as a waitress in your hotel this summer vacation. My advantages are as follows:
Firstly, I am healthy and strong. I can work for long hours in summer. Secondly, my English is excellent. I can speak English fluently and have no difficulty communicating with foreigners. Finally , I am outgoing and good at communicating with others. As a result, I am popular among my classmates and teachers.
I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance to work in your hotel. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
【解析】
试题分析:要求考生给一家招聘暑期兼职工的涉外酒店写应聘信。要符合提示所给要求,保证字数在120左右。
亮点分析:文中运用了较好的从句和复合句,如开头用复合句介绍自己“My name is Li Hua and I am 18 years old…”简单却能使内容清晰,条件状语从句“I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance to work in your hotel.”等;文中多处运用到好的固定短语,如“in response to…”“be fit for…”“have no difficulty in doing sth”“be good at doing sth”等;第二部分根据提示介绍优点,较好的运用了连接词“Firstly…Secondly…Finally…”,使文章逻辑层次分明,条理清晰;最后有适当的扩展,并且结尾有礼有节,是一篇较好的考场作文。
考点:考查应用文写作