假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只充许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

Like a movie lover,I used to stay home watching TV during the summer holidays. After doing my homework,I always spend too much time in front of the TV set. Unless my parents encouraged me go outside and get some fresh air,I didn't listen to them. The summer holiday is coming and all I want to do are lie on the couch and watch TV as usually. However,V ve been told the park in our area will offer free movies the whole family can watch them soon. The news which we can watch movies under the star really makes us happy. After all,we can watch some movies together with our family while enjoyed the fresh air.

1. Like a movie ... Like →As

2. . .. I always spend... spend →spent

3. Unless my parents ... Unless→ Though / Although

4. . .. encouraged me go ... go 前加 to

5. . .. want to do are ... are→is

6. . .. TV as usually. usually→ usual

7. . .. can watch them ... 去掉 them

8. The news which ... which→that .

9. . .. under the star... star→stars

10.…family while enjoyed … enjoyed→enjoying

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A Canadian study suggests that current sodium (钠) intake levels are relatively safe for most Americans and that reducing them to the very low levels recommended by federal health officials and leading medical groups may harm a significant number.

The current average sodium consumption in the United States is about 3,400 milligrams (there are 1,000 milligrams in one gram) per day. This is about the amount of sodium in about 1. 5 teaspoons of salt. Dietary guidelines offered by the federal government and leading medical groups recommend reducing the average to 2,300 milligrams for the general population and 1,500 for groups considered at greater risk,like adults older than 50,African-Americans,and people with high blood pressure,among others.

However,previous studies have found little evidence to support those low recommended sodium targets. There is considerable evidence that lowering sodium can reduce blood pressure,but there is scant evidence that reducing sodium consumption will necessarily reduce the risk of heart attacks, strokes(中风) and death.

Now a large study by researchers at McMaster University in Ontario,Canada,which tracked more than 100,000 people from 17 countries on five continents,has found that the safest levels of sodium intake are between 3 ,000 and 6,000 milligrams. Consumption below that level showed increased risk of death and cardiovascular(心血管的) events.

Roughly 10 percent of the patients followed in the study fell below 3,000 milligrams,a sizable number to put at risk.

Brian Strom,honorary head of biomedical and health sciences at Rutgers University,who led a group of experts who reviewed the data on sodium for the Institute of Medicine last year,said that the new McMaster data are among the best available and that no study has shown a benefit from reducing sodium consumption to below 2,300 milligrams a day.

That does not mean individuals wiiose sodium intake is high should not take steps to bring it down. The McMaster researchers say that if your blood pressure rises beyond the normal level (140/90 or higher) or your sodium intake is high,you should reduce sodium consumption,perhaps even to below 5 ,000 milligrams.

6. For healthy elderly people,the US government recommends sodium intake .

A. 1,500 milligrams daily

B. 2,300 milligrams daily

C. 3,000 milligrams daily

D. 3,400 milligrams daily

7. The underlined word “scant” in Paragraph 3 is closest in meaning to “”.

A. direct B. important

C. limited D. conflicting

8. According to the study,consuming less than 3,000 milligrams of sodium a day.

A. is beneficial for most patients

B. may help prevent heart disease

C. may be harmful to your health

D. is especially helpful for Americans

9. What is Strom's attitude towards the research findings?

A. He is doubtful about them.

B. He is uncertain of them.

C. He tolerates them.

D. He supports them.

10. What is the Canadian scientists’ advice for high blood pressure patients?

A. Follow the government's dietary guidelines.

B. Lower sodium intake to a reasonable level.

C. Join one of the leading medical groups.

D. Have physical examinations regularly.

Tibet is among 1. most popular places for Chinese tourists. The number of travellers to Tibet has grown 2. 10% every year for several years. Since July 1 ,2006,when the first train ran 1,956 kilometers from Xining to Lhasa,more and more people 3. (go) to Tibet.

The train stops at several famous places along the way. Passengers can also enjoy many 4.(service) during the journey. On the train,passengers can have tea,eggs and noodles for breakfast and 5. (fry) chicken and green vegetables for lunch and dinner. Unlike most Chinese trains which have open-hole toilets,this one has special toilets

6. can collect the waste. The special rubbish system keeps the environment clean. All the windows can protect people from the sun 7. (shine) brightly. Computers and mobile phones can be charged.

Because there isn’t much oxygen in Tibet,the train provides oxygen masks for those who need them. Passengers will feel 8.(comfort) when they have enough oxygen on the famous “roof of the world”. There 9. (be) also doctors on the train to make sure 10. all of the travellers are safe.

Li: Hi,Rob!I've heard that you have financial problems 1. (recent) . What has hap- pened?

Rob: I had to get my car 2. (fix) , I received a huge tax bill and then to make matters worse,I 3. (lose) my wallet yesterday —I’m doing my best to keep the wolf from the door.

Li: You really have got problems if you’ve got to keep a wolf out 4. your house!

Rob: Not a real wolf. When people say they,re trying to keep the wolf from the door they mean 5. they have only just got enough money to survive.

Li: Oh I see!So you just have enough money to eat and live?

Rob: Yes,it's not 6. good position to be in.

Li: I get it. With all your 7. (bill) to pay you really are struggling to keep the wolf from the door — so 8. are you going to do?

Rob: I need to ask a good friend 9. (lend) me some money. A really good friend — like you Li? I know you have some spare cash.

Li: Sorry Rob,V ve just spent that on a(n) 10.(amaze) holiday. Can you wait until next week?

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只充许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

The girl I will always remember her is Mary,who was my classmate seven year ago. She was ： quiet,always greeted the teachers at our school and never spoke ill anyone. At that time,all the kids in my class included me were impolite,never listening to the teachers. Therefore,Mary was always so polite. One day I asked her what she wasn’ t like the rest of us so what she told me changed the way I acted. She said,uIf you ever want to be respectful in life,you have to respect others." Heard what she said,I started respecting others more and telling another people what I had been told.

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只充许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

If you can identify your personal values,your personal goals will not go wrongly. You must write your goals down on a piece of paper. If so,they will only become dreams. After you know your personal values,find out that you really want to achieve in life. Life had many aspects and in order to lead happy life,you should set a goal in every aspect.Nothing which happens just by accidents. Take a look for all of the things that are kept you from accomplishing your goal and develop a plan to overcome them. You also need to find out the people or group you need to work with to reaching your goals.

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只充许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

Dear Mr. Smith,

On behalf of the students are going on the trip to Valencia in October,I’d like to say thanks for your hard work in organized the trip. It looks great and we are all really looking forward for it. However,we are wondering that we can suggest one change. The Sunday after we will arrive,there is a motorcycle event and we all want to go. At a moment,we are scheduled to visit a zoo that day. Although we,re sure the zoo is really nice,there seems a pity to miss so a big event while we are there. We hope the change is possibly and thanks again for all your works.

Yours,

Lin Ling

We often overlook and completely forget how dangerous the game of baseball can be for the players on the field,and even for the fans,who gather very closely as baseballs and bats fly around at the park at terrifying speeds.

Unfortunately,we were hit with a troubling reminder on Friday night at Fenway Park,Boston as one fan reportedly suffered life-threatening injuries after being struck in the face by the (击球端) of a broken bat. The scary incident happened because a player hit the ball hard,causing his bat to break at the handle. The broken barrel flew into the stands to the left of home plate (the place that the player has to stand next to in order to hit the ball,and the last place they have to touch to score a point) where it reportedly struck the fan. According to Boston police,the fan was taken to Beth Israel Deaconess Medical Center,where she’s currently receiving treatment for her injuries.

A security guard who witnessed the accident said the woman,who was sitting with her husband and son at the time,suffered serious injuries. Her son sitting near her was terribly frightened. A number of fans witnessed the accident,including Alex Merlas of Brookline. “Brett Lawrie hit the ball and the bat broke in half near the end of the bat,” Metlas said. “It hit the fan on the top of her forehead and there was a lot of bleeding. I don't think I’ve ever seen that much blood."

That game was delayed temporarily so the fan could be transported to an ambulance waiting at one of the gates inside the ballpark. Fans were left shocked and shaken as the stadium crew cleaned up the scene. Players could be seen discussing it as well,as all who witnessed it were obviously affected. Those who were watching the accident wished the woman fan and her family the very best.

24. The first paragraph of the text is used to .

A. attract readers’ attention to the topic

B. introduce the meaning of the topic

C. make a comment about the topic

D. provide background to the topic

25. What hit the woman fan?

A. The handle. B. The baseball.

C. The whole bat. D. The broken barrel.

26. The underlined part “Brett Lawrie” in Paragraph 3 is the name of.

A. an eye witness B. a security guard

C. a sports reporter D. a baseball player

27. The game stopped for a short time in order to.

A. make sure the players were not affected

B. take the woman to the ambulance

C. calm audiences down

D. look into the accident

第二节:书面表达(满分25分)

请阅读所给图画,按要求用英语写一篇词数为100左右的短文。内容要求：

1. 描述画面；

2. 概述其含义；

3. 谈谈个人感想。

注意：

1. 开头己给出，不计入总词数；

2. 可适，发挥，使内容充实、行文连贯。

In the picture,

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