题目内容
5.假如你是张华,一名刚刚进入高一的学生.面对新的学习环境和学习任务带来的压力,想和父母说说心里话,请你用英文在你的博客上以书信的形式表达出来.内容要点如下:知心话 | 对父母的感谢 | 感谢他们倾注关爱,关心鼓励 |
对父母的希望 | 1.和他们多交流,使自己保持良好状态 | |
2.创造条件,给自己提供实时帮助 | ||
学习打算 | 考生自拟(至少写两点) |
1.短文须包括以上所有内容要点.
2.词数100左右;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数.
Dear Mom and Dad,
I have realized my dream,being a student in this key high school.On this special occasion,how I wish I could have a heart-to-heart talk with you.
Yours ever
Zhang Hua.
分析 高分句型:
句型一:how I wish I could have a heart-to-heart talk with you.我是多么希望能和你们说一说心里话.固定句型:how+主语+谓语+其他,是感叹句的一种.
句型二:it is my sincere hope that you can spare more time to communicate with me.我真心希望你们能抽出更多的时间和我多交流.固定句型:it is…that…其中it是形式主语,that从句是真正的主语.
解答 Dear Mom and Dad,
I have realized my dream,being a student in this key high school.On this special occasion,how I wish I could have a heart-to-heart talk with you.
To begin with,I am grateful to all the love,care and encouragement you have given to me all these years.At the same time,it is my sincere hope that you can spare more time to communicate with me.In this way,I can always be in a good state in the coming term.Besides,I also hope that you can creat necessary conditions,thus providing me with timely help.
For my part,I am determined to concentrate more time and energy on my study and,if any problem turns up,turn to my teachers immediately.What's more,I will pay special attention to maths where I used to score low.After all,a balanced development is very important in the future study.
Your loving son,
Zhang Hua
点评 本文是篇材料作文.考生在写作之前必修认真审题,首先要注意文章的时态,要求是学生和父母交流心里话,表达对父母的感谢和希望以及自己的学习打算,所以要用一般现在时,必须用第一人称.作文内容必须把题干要求的都写进去,同时对内容合理地进行展开.