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7．假如你叫李华，是一名高中生．随着网络的发展，网上抢红包（grabbing red envelopes with money on line）越来越流行，吸引了成千上万的人．对此有人认为：抢红包是一种时尚，增加节日气氛，带来快乐和惊喜，增进朋友间友谊…但也有人认为：为了抢红包，很多年轻人整日抱着个手机，无暇与家人交流，而且浪费时间和精力，影响视力和睡眠，网上还易受到欺骗损失财物…请你给报社编辑写一封信，谈谈人们对网上抢红包的看法．信的内容包括以下几点：
1．抢红包的好处；2．抢红包的坏处；3．提出自己的建议并说明理由．
注意：词数100字左右．信的开头已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Sir：
My name is LiHua．
                                                          ．

分析 本篇书面表达为书信形式的议论文，在高考英语书面表达中，议论文的命题形式主要以表格式或提纲式材料来呈现．它要求观点正确、语言简练．就本题来说，考生应该先确定文章的时态--一般现在时，然后逐层展开论述，本文就抢红包一事进行讨论，应该包括1．抢红包的好处；2．抢红包的坏处；3．提出自己的建议并说明理由．
【亮点说明】
文章使用了非常好的短语和句子给文章增色，With the uprising of internet 随着网络的快速发展；What'more 而且；In addition另外；Otherwise否则；What's worse更糟的是；As far as I'm concerned，以我的观点来看
Some people are in favor of it because they think it is fashionable，adding to the atmosphere of festivals and it brings people joy and excitement．（高分句型）
As far as I'm concerned，grabbing red envelopes on line is not a bad thing so long as we limit the time spent on line．（高分句型）

解答 With the uprising of internet，grabbing red envelopes with money on line is becoming more and more popular，attracting thousands of people．Some people are in favor of it because they think it is fashionable，adding to the atmosphere of festivals and it brings people joy and excitement．（高分句型）What'more，it also promotes people's friendship．
Otherwise，some are against it．They argue that many young people aren't willing to communicating with the elders，holding a cellphone all day long just in order to grab a red envelope．（高分句型）In addition，it is a waste of time and energy and it will affect one's eyesight and sleep．What's worse，some are cheated on line，resulting in the loss of money．
As far as I'm concerned，grabbing red envelopes on line is not a bad thing so long as we limit the time spent on line．（高分句型）

点评 应该注意适当增加细节以使行文连贯，比如适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词，使文章流畅、通顺，并避免因反复使用句式相同的简单句而造成的单调感．（1）认真审题，确定体裁． （2）构思要点．根据题目要求，理解要表达的要点．设计好文章的层次段落，考虑所用时态、人称等，把要点串联起来，构成文章框架．（3）选词造句，避难选易．（4）认真检查，避免错误．仔细阅读全文，查找是否有错，注意时态、单词拼写、字母大小写、标点是否有误，句式是否正确．逻辑是否一致．

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