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7.最近,你班将举行以"How to live a healthy lifestyle"为题的英语班会,请你准备一篇100词左右的演讲稿,谈谈在日常生活中我们应该怎样养成健康的生活方式.

分析 本篇书面表达考查提纲作文.要求根据提示信息谈谈在日常生活中我们应该怎样养成健康的生活方式,因为是发言稿,所以要求文字通俗易懂,贴近生活.
其次,因为提示信息较少,所以要适当发挥,补充足够内容.此外,在时态方面要注意使用一般现在时,人称方面为第一人称.
【相关语法点提示】
本篇书面表达可以在文章开头说明健康生活方式的重要性"good health is so essential to our daily life and lays the foundation for our future development
";
然后在第二段用三个相似句式"we should…"具体阐明怎样养成健康的生活方式"have a healthy diet、play sports regularly、take a positive attitude、
far away from computer";最后在第三段用紧扣主题的句子"I hope all of us can live healthily and happily"收尾.这样的结构布局不仅把要点全面展示出来
,而且使得文章结构清晰,条理分明.
另外,注意多种句式的运用会使文章亮点纷呈,例如:宾语从句"I strongly advise that we should never sit too long in  front of computers"、形式主语"because it is bad for our health"、结果状语从句"so that we can keep mentally healthy"等等.另外,在写作时还要注意连接词的使用,比如However、Additionally、what's more、furthermore等,以使文章上下衔接自然,表述自然流畅.

解答 Dear fellow students,
        As we all know,good health is so essential to our daily life and lays the foundation for our future development.(高分句型一)(点明主题)
       However,in modem times,many people don't live a healthy lifestyle clue to different reasons.In my opinion,we should have a healthy diet and play
sports regularly to keep physically healthy.Besides,we should take a positive attitude towards people around us so that we can keep mentally healthy.(高分句型二)Furthermore,I strongly advise that we should never sit too long in front of computers because it is bad for our health.(高分句型三)(如何养成健康的生活方式)
      I hope all of us can live healthily and happily.That's all.Thank you!(结尾)

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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