题目内容
假定英语课上老师要求同桌中间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:把缺词处叫个娄子符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town,he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.
【小题1】holding---hold
【小题2】passes----passed
【小题3】much--- well/clearly
【小题4】shoulder—shoulders
【小题5】toward---to/into
【小题6】himself---him
【小题7】he前加and
【小题8】去掉fact前的a
【小题9】during---when
【小题10】never---ever
解析【小题1】此处used to意为:过去常常,to是不定式符号。故用动词原形。
【小题2】根据前面的I was only four可知,用一般过去时。
【小题3】根据句意可知,我很清楚地记得我的爷爷。此处very much是多的意思,不合题意。
【小题4】根据常理“人有两个肩膀”。所以,用复数形式。
【小题5】根据句意可知,这里指:黑胡子变成了白胡子。所以,用turn to或into的形式。
【小题6】句意:他的深沉的声音把他和别人区别开来。所以,用him。
【小题7】根据句中结构可知He had a deep voice, (which set him apart from others in our small town,)和he was strong and powerful.是并列关系。所以,用and连接起来。
【小题8】根据固定短语in fact可知,去掉a。
【小题9】根据they came over to play or do homework with me.是句子,所以,用连词when,during是介词,不能连接状语从句。
【小题10】根据句意:他是我认识的最温柔的人。可知将never改为ever。这是语意错误。