Question

12．假设你叫李华，你所在的学校的美国交流生 David 邀请你周末跟他朋友一起去露营．但是你 舅舅一家周末要来你们家，所以你不能前往，请你给 David 写封道歉信．
注意：
1．词数 100 左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯的；
3．开头语已为你写好． 
Dear David，
How are you？Thank you for your invitation to go hiking and camping with your friends this weekend．Unfortunately，it is much to my regret that I cannot join you and your family，because my uncle is visiting us this weekend．（高分句型一）I haven't seen my cousin for a long time so I think I'd better stay at home and show my cousin around．（高分句型二）
I feel terribly sorry for missing such a happy get-together，and I hope that all of you have a good time．With my sincere apology and thanks for your generosity．Please send my regards to your friends．（高分句型三）
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息 假设你叫李华，你所在的学校的美国交流生 David 邀请你周末跟他朋友一起去露营．但是你 舅舅一家周末要来你们家，所以你不能前往，请你给 David 写封道歉信．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：go hiking 去远足；Unfortunately不幸的是；have a good time玩的愉快；feel sorry for因为…而抱歉；
Unfortunately，it is much to my regret that I cannot join you and your family，because my uncle is visiting us this weekend．（高分句型一）
I haven't seen my cousin for a long time so I think I'd better stay at home and show my cousin around．（高分句型二）
With my sincere apology and thanks for your generosity．Please send my regards to your friends．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear David，
       How are you？Thank you for your invitation to go hiking and camping with your friends this weekend．Unfortunately，it is much to my regret that I cannot join you and your family，because my uncle is visiting us this weekend．（高分句型一）I haven't seen my cousin for a long time so I think I'd better stay at home and show my cousin around．（高分句型二）
       I feel terribly sorry for missing such a happy get-together，and I hope that all of you have a good time．With my sincere apology and thanks for your generosity．Please send my regards to your friends．（高分句型三）
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．