题目内容
3.假设你是李华.你所在的英语协会将举办主题为"我的理想生活"的演讲比赛,请你用英文写一篇演讲稿,内容主要包括:1.你的理想工作;2.你理想中的业余生活;3.你将如何实现你的理想.
注意:1.词数100左右(开头已为你写好,不计入总词数);
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
I want to talk about my ideal life in the future.
分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示你所在的英语协会将举办主题为"我的理想生活"的演讲比赛,请你用英文写一篇演讲稿,内容主要包括,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:你的理想工作;你理想中的业余生活;你将如何实现你的理想.2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:try ones best to do尽力去做某事;what's more而且;besides另外;after all毕竟;make full use of 充分利用
By writing,I can share my understanding of the world with my readers.(高分句型一)
I will try my best to create a happy and harmonious environment at home.(高分句型二)
To make the life I dream of become a reality,I will study harder and make full use of every minute to epuip myself with knowledge and skills.(高分句型三)
解答 I want to talk about my ideal life in the future.My ideal job is to be a writer.By writing,I can share my understanding of the world with my readers.(高分句型一)And it can give me a flexible schedule.
After work,I'd like to spend my time with my family.I will try my best to create a happy and harmonious environment at home.(高分句型二)Besides,I will invite my family to movies regularly.What's more,I will go travelling with them during the holiday.
After all,god helps thost who help themseves.To make the life I dream of become a reality,I will study harder and make full use of every minute to epuip myself with knowledge and skills.(高分句型三)
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
---Sorry to bother you,sir,but the matter is .( )
A. | effective | B. | major | C. | urgent | D. | scary |