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8．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．作文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Mrs．Wilson，
I'm going out shopping and won't come back soon．I have taken with me the four book which you asked me return to the City Library．On about 1o'clock this afternoon，your neighbor Tracy come to visit you．Looked worried，she said she couldn't drink coffee with you this evening．She also said that her father were ill and that she would have to take care of him．She felt terrible sorry and promised to visit you before her father got better．By the way，she has already been told Susan and Grace about this change，so you needn't call themselves．
Yours
Liu Mei．

分析 这是Liu Mei写给Mrs．Wilson的一封信，信中Liu Mei告诉Mrs．Wilson她要出去买东西，顺便把Mrs．Wilson要她还给图书馆的四本书还上．她还告诉Mrs．Wilson下午一点钟Tracy来过，Tracy因为父亲生病今晚不能和Mrs．Wilson一起喝咖啡了，并且Tracy已经把这个变化告诉了Susan 和 Grace．

解答 Mrs．Wilson，
I'm going out shopping and won't come back soon．I have taken with me the four bookwhich you asked me∧return to the City Library．On about 1o'clock this afternoon，your neighbor Tracy cometo visit you．Lookedworried，she said she couldn't drink coffee with you this evening．She also said that her father wereill and that she would have to take care of him．She felt terrible sorry and promised to visit you before her father got better．By the way，she has already been told Susan and Grace about this change，so you needn't call themselves．
Yours
详解：
1．book改为books；考查名词复数，book为可数名词，前面有数词four，所以要用复数形式books．
2．return前面加to；考查动词不定式，ask sb to do sth是固定搭配，意为"要求某人做某事"．
3．On改为At；考查介词，on表时间时指在"某一天，某个节日或星期几"，当时间具体到某一点钟，某一刻时介词要用at．
4．come改为came；考查动词的时态，结合上下文可知，这个动作发生在过去，故用一般过去时．
5．Looked改为Looking；考查分词作状语，句子主语she与动词look存在逻辑上的主谓关系，故用现在分词形式作状语．
6．were改为was；考查主谓一致，句子的主语为her father，所用动词要用单数形式was．
7．terrible改为terribly；考查副词，这里用副词terribly作状语，修饰形容sorry．
8．before改为after；考查介词，结合上下文分析，句意应为"她承诺在她父亲的病好了之后就会来看你"，所以把before改为after．
9．got改为gets；考查动词时态，这里用一般现在时表示将来．
10．themselves改为them；考查代词，分析句意为"你不必再给他们打电话了"，这里的代词them指代前面的Susan and Grace．

点评 短文改错当中，首先要从整体掌握短文大意，结合上下文语境并充分运用平时掌握的基础知识，习惯用法，短语搭配等对短文进行分析，以便找出文中的错误所在，并加以修正．

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