Question

3．请根据下列提示，以"What will life be like without animals？"为题，写一篇100词左右的英语短文，介绍保护珍稀动物的意义及必要性．
    要点提示：
    1．保护动物的重要性；
    2．目前动物保护的现状；
    3．你的建议．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息以"What will life be like without animals？"为题，写一篇100词左右的英语短文，介绍保护珍稀动物的意义及必要性，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：保护动物的重要性；目前动物保护的现状；建议． 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：rare animals稀有动物；get along well with与…相处的好；Unfortunately不幸地是；Therefore因此；keep it in mind 牢记； At the same time同时；After all毕竟
 Their existence，especially the existence of precious and rare animals makes the whole world lively and colorful．（高分句型一）
Unfortunately，we heard such news recently that rare animal，even kept in the zoo，couldn't escape being hurt or killed，at which we can feel nothing but shocked．（高分句型二）
Therefore，we should study the information about rare animals and keep it in mind that protecting animals is the duty of everyone．（高分句型三）

解答 Animals are close friends of human beings．Their existence，especially the existence of precious and rare animals makes the whole world lively and colorful．（高分句型一） It's quite important for all of us to get along well with them．Unfortunately，we heard such news recently that rare animal，even kept in the zoo，couldn't escape being hurt or killed，at which we can feel nothing but shocked．（高分句型二）The reason why it happened is that some people lack understanding about these animals and care for them．
       Therefore，we should study the information about rare animals and keep it in mind that protecting animals is the duty of everyone．（高分句型三）At the same time，we should take active and effective measures．After all，protecting animals is protecting ourselves．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．