题目内容
5.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Now I'd like tell you something about my part-time job this summer vacation,in which I worked as the guide in a travel agency.It was the first time that I have earned money on my own.I've realized what hard my parents work to support for the family.I used to keep on ask them for money,but now I'll learn to share worry with my parents.I've learned how to get along well with others.Beside,I have gained some social experience and you have learned something that can't be learned from textbook.In a word,I had a wonderfully and valuable summer vacation.
分析 本文讲述了作者在暑假兼职的感受,这是作者第一次依靠自己来获得金钱,通过暑假兼职,他知道了父母的辛劳,并学会了为父母分忧,同时还学到了一些在课本上学不到的社会经验.总而言之,这是一次很有价值的经历.
解答 Now I'd like∧tell you something about my part-time job this summer vacation,in which I worked as the guide in a travel agency.It was the first time that I have earned money on my own.I've realized what hard my parents work to support for the family.I used to keep on ask them for money,but now I'll learn to share worry with my parents.I've learned how to get along well with others.Beside,I have gained some social experience and you have learned something that can't be learned from textbook.In a word,I had a wonderfully and valuable summer vacation.
1.like 后加to.考查固定句式.would like to do 表示"想要去做某事".
2.as the guide 中the 改为a.考查冠词.本句I worked as the guide in a travel agency表示我在一家旅游公司作一个导游,是泛指,所以用a.
3.have 改为had.考查固定句式.表示"某人第一次做某事"用 It was the first time that I had done…;或 It is the first time that I have done…本句的主句是It was the first time,所以从句用过去完成时态,所以 have 改为had.
4.what 改为how.考查宾语从句的引导词.修饰副词 hard用how表示父母是多么努力的工作.
5.去掉for.考查介词. support 是及物动词,所以直接修饰宾语 the family,不用for.
6.ask 改为asking.考查非谓语动词.介词短语keep on 的宾语用doing,表示"一直做".
7.Beside改为Besides.考查词形相似,含义不同的单词.Beside表示"在..旁边";Besides 表示"此外",本句I've learned how to get along well with others和I have gained some social experience 之间是递进关系,所以用 Besides.
8.you 改为I.考查人称一致.I have gained some social experience 和 you have learned something that can't be learned from textbook是并列关系,所以人称一致,you 改为I.
9.textbook改为textbooks.考查名词.textbook是可数名词,本句表示从课本上学习到东西,所以不会是一本,所以用复数.
10.wonderfully 改为wonderful.考查形容词和副词.修饰名词短语 and valuable summer vacation.用形容词.
点评 考查短文改错.
冠词在英文中属于虚词,在句子里主要是对名词起限定作用.这类词的数量很小,但是其活动性却很大,很大.在英文中,a/an并不等于one.
例:He only has one dictionary.他只有一本词典.( 正确 )
He only has a dictionary.他只有一本词典.( 错误 )
不定冠词在句子中最大的语法功能是:用在可数名词的单数形式前表示泛指--表明一类人或事物区别于它类.
而不定冠词多用于泛指人或者事或在某些词组中.第二种用法是约定俗成的,我们只有遵从而无旁的选择.
A. | was travelling | B. | travelled | ||
C. | had been travelling | D. | was to travel |