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15．为减少城市温室气体排放量，乐清市政府决定推出"便民自行车"，为市民提供免费的自行车租赁服务．这项决定得到了大多数市民的拥护，但也有一部分人持反对意见．假设你是一名高二学生李越，请给市长写封信谈谈你对此项决议的看法．信的内容应包括以下两点：
1．决议内容和市民反应，
2．你对此项决议的看法．
信的开头已经为你写好，但不计入总字数．
注意：1．字数100-120.2．文中不能出现真实姓名，班级和学校名称．
Dear Mayor，
I am Li Yue，a seniorⅡstudent．Recently I've read in the newspaper that our government will provide citizens with free bicycles to travel around．The majority of citizens are delighted to hear his discussion，while there are still some different voices，worrying that it will merely be a waste of money．
There is no doubt that this decision will encourage more citizens to ride bicycles．Consequently，it contributes to reducing thge traffic pressure in our city as well as the emission or the greenhouse gases，thus in a way slowing the process of global warming．For us citizens，not only is riding bicycle an economic way to transport but it offers us a good chance to exerciseThank you for reading my letter．I am sure all citizens are looking forward to a more convenient life and a greener world．
Yours faithfully，

Li Yue．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们给市长写封信谈谈对"便民自行车"此项决议的看法，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：决议内容和市民反应，你对此项决议的看法．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为决议内容和市民反应．第二部分为对此项决议的看法．
重点短语与句型：
provide sb with sth 提供某人某物
the majority of 大多数
contribute to 促成，是…原因
高分句型一：Recently I've read in the newspaper that our government will provide citizens with free bicycles to travel around此句用了that引导宾语从句
高分句型二：For us citizens，not only is riding bicycle an economic way to transport but it offers us a good chance to exercise．此句 not only…but also 前面部分倒装，后面不倒装

解答 Dear Mayor，
I am Li Yue，a seniorⅡstudent．Recently I've read in the newspaper that our government will provide citizens with free bicycles to travel around（高分句型一）．The majority of citizens are delighted to hear his discussion，while there are still some different voices，worrying that it will merely be a waste of money．（决议内容和市民反应）
There is no doubt that this decision will encourage more citizens to ride bicycles．Consequently，it contributes to reducing thge traffic pressure in our city as well as the emission or the greenhouse gases，thus in a way slowing the process of global warming．For us citizens，not only is riding bicycle an economic way to transport but it offers us a good chance to exercise．（高分句型二）Thank you for reading my letter．I am sure all citizens are looking forward to a more convenient life and a greener world．（对此项决议的看法）
Yours faithfully，
Li Yue．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．