短文改错 A Visit to the Zoo June 1,on Sunday Fine 1． It was Sunday today．Sally and I decided to visit 2． the Xi'an Zoo, where is only four km from our school． 3． We started at nine．After 15 minutes, 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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A Visit to the Zoo
June 1,on Sunday　　　　　　　　　　　　　Fine	1．________
It was Sunday today．Sally and I decided to visit	2．________
the Xi'an Zoo, where is only four km from our school．	3．________
We started at nine．After 15 minutes, we by the No．10 bus	4．________
to get there．Oh, the zoo was crowd with people,	5．________
students, workers, villagers and so on．Most of them was	6．________
young parents with his children．There were many kinds of	7．________
animals in the zoo．They were elephants, bears, lions, monkeys	8．________
and the beautiful birds．Children liked the monkeys very	9．________
Much．At 12 o'clock we returned home．What good time we	10．________
had at the zoo today!

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解析：

　　1．去掉on在日记、书信或公文中加注的日期及地点前面均不加介词，故此处on为多余．

　　2．was→is日记中所描述的动作一般是发生在过去的，故应该用一般过去时态．但像此句中的“今天是……”要用一般现在时表示，因为写日记的时间是今天．至此今天仍未过完．

　　3．where→which在定语从句中，关系代词that/which/who/whom等在从句中作主语或宾语，如此非限制性定语从句中的which就是作主语用的；关系副词where/when/why在从句中作状语．

　　4．by→took“乘车”这个意义由动词表示时应该用take/ride等，由介词短语表示时用by bus/train等．前者在句中作谓语，后者在句中作行为方式状语．

　　5．crowd→crowded某地方“拥挤”是be crowded，不是be crowd．

　　6．was→were主语Most of them是复数意义，故谓语动词应为were．

　　7．his→their这里的形容词性物主代词应与前面的young parents相一致，故用their．

　　8．√

　　9．去掉beautiful birds前面的the beautiful birds与and前面的elephants, bears, lions, monkeys并列，它们都应表示泛指，故不能在beautiful birds前面加定冠词the．

　　10．good前加a time表示一段时间，常出现在以下词组中：have a good/wonderful time, for a long time, a long time ago, for some time, some time ago等．

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