Question

七．书面表达（15分）

Answer 1

Version one:

Dear schoolmaster, teachers and parents,

As a senior student, I have many things in mind to speak out most.

First, to the headmaster, I’d like to suggest creating a better environment for us to live and study in. we devote all the time to our lessons, so we’d like more time to relax. Relaxation is of equal importance. Besides, we hope to have more communication with you so that you can learn about our opinions.

Second, to the teachers, we hope you can give us more free time to think by ourselves and smile more in class, because smile is sunshine.

Finally, to our parents, we expect you to have a better understanding of us. Meanwhile, to be independent, we need more space of our own.

Only by communicating with each other can we get along well together.

Yours sincerely,

                                                      Lucy.

        

Version two:

Dear schoolmaster, teachers and parents,

I'd like to tell you some sincere words. I’d really appreciate it if you can think it over carefully.

As we all know that schoolmaster is the leader, who is in charge of the whole school. On one hand, he or she should create a good surrounding for us, not only the environment, but also the learning atmosphere。In this case, our students can coordinate study and rest. On the other hand, he or she should listen to us patiently and take more good suggestions from us.

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It's known that teacher is the engineer of the human soul，so, why not smile often and be more patient to us, instead of more punishment and criticism. And it's also very important that you give us more chance to think instead of giving us direct answer.

With regard(关于) to our dear parents, who are also our friends in our whole life, I hope you can give us more understanding, for we are not still the small children under your arms. We must learn to be more mature as well as brave. So, will you pleas give us more freedom and let us be independent.

Yours sincerely,    Lucy