Question

假如你是李华，你的澳大利亚笔友Martin写信向你询问高中一年级开学近三个月来的学习生活情况。请根据下列提示给他写一封回信，告诉他你的经历和收获。

1． 远离父母，学会了独立；

2． 结识了很多新朋友；

3． 在英语和数学方面取得很大进步；

4． 课余时间参加各种活动锻炼自己，如英语角等。

注意：1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

2. 词数: 120左右。

3. 信的开头已给出，不计入总数。

参考词汇：live on one’s own 自立    English Corner  英语角

Dear Martin,

How time flies! ……

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Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Martin,

How time flies! It is almost 3 months since I entered senior high school. I’m happy to tell you something about my school life.

My school is fifty kilometers away from my hometown. Not living with my parents, I have learned how to live on my own. And I’ve made some new friends, from whom I’ve learned a lot. I have made great progress in my English and math. Besides, in my spare time, I often take part in different kinds of after-school activities. For example, every week I go to the English Corner where I communicate with others in English. 

What about your school life? Would you like to share it with me?

Best wishes,

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。