Question

17．我们国家长期实行独生子女政策，现在政府将放开这一政策，允许夫妻中一方是独生子女的家庭生育第二个孩子，对此你怎么看．请围绕以下几点谈谈你的看法．
谈谈你对目前实施的独生子女政策的理解；
对未来实施夫妻中一方是独生子女可生育第二个孩子的政策的想法；
你对未来中国的人口问题有何期望，简述原因．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
When it is carried out for some time，many people not only see its advantages but also ②disadvantages．
当它被实行了一段时间后，许多人不仅看到了它的优点，而且也看到了它的缺点．
本句是when引导的时间状语从句；主句中的并列连词 not only…but also…"不但…，而且…"在此处连接了两个并列的谓语：由于not only中的not与其后的谓语动词不存在否定关系，故无需在not前加用助动词．
句型二：
But if their parents have two children，they can share the burden of①taking care of ②their parents．
但是如果他们的父母有两个孩子，他们就能分担照顾父母的责任．
本句为if引导的条件状语从句；①动词短语 share the burden of意为：分担…的责任；②固定短语take care of意为：照顾；由于此处用在介词of之后，故用taking．

解答 Is it Necessary for Two-child Policy？
China is a great country with the largest population in the world．In order to solve the population problem，our government decides to implement one-child policy．When it is carried out for some time，many people not only see its advantages but also disadvantages．【高分句型一】Thus，people argue that two-child policy should be put into effect．（概述我国政府决定实施二胎政策的原因）In my opinion，two-child policy should be carried out．（提出自己的观点：在我看来，应该实施二胎政策．）
First of all，two-child policy is the gift for some only child．For some families，maybe the parents are only child and they also can have only child．Put aside the loneliness of their child，when their child grows up and they grow older，their child marry with an only child girl accidentally，the burden on their child and his wife is unimaginable heavy．Their child and his wife have to take care of two old couples．Usually，a young couple looking after an old couple is a little difficult； if the pressure increases twice，how can they stand it？But if their parents have two children，they can share the burden of taking care of their parents．【高分句型二】It would be much better．（站在独生子女的角度上论述了实行二胎政策的好处．）
Secondly，two-child policy can guarantee the number of Chinese population．As the widely spread of one-child policy，some people have changed their conception about giving birth．If they firmly believe one-child policy，there will be more and more DINKs．After several decades，our country will be famous for lack of population．（从我国人口数量上论述了实行二胎政策的必要性．）
In conclusion，one-child policy has out of date．And tow-child policy is necessary．It can solve the problem of nowadays and the future．（重申论点．）

点评 首先应注意议论文写作的三个要素：1、提出论点；2、组织论据，进行论证；3、得出结论； 其次，除了学会套用一些常用的句型和短语外，还需要根据题目的具体内容和要求，灵活地选用句式；另外，根据句子语气的需要，可在英语句中适当地增加一些情态动词"should/can/may/had better/must"，以及句与句之间合理使用一些并列、递进、转折等关系的关联词语，这样，议论文的结构会更加严谨，更具说服力和感染力．