假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改均� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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1．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear Sir，
I'm writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host family for the British students．
Locating in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood，our large fully-equipped apartment meet all their needs．In addition the convenient public transportation，our own car can also take them to some nearby places of interest．With fluent English，I'm sure I will have no difficulty communicate with them．Above all，we have hosted two British students last year，through it we've gained lots of experience．What's more，my mother is a good cooker and can guarantee us a wonderful chance of tasting delicious Chinese food．
I would greatly appreciate you if I could have the chance to host them and make friends with them．
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

分析这是一封申请接待英国学生的书信．我家位于一个漂亮安静的社区，交通很便利．我的英语很流利，因此和他们交流没有问题．而且去年我们接待过两个英国学生，所以有很多经验．此外我妈妈做饭很好，保证他们可以品尝到美味的中国食物．

解答 Dear Sir，
I'm writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host family for the British students．
Locating in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood，our large fully-equipped apartment meet all their needs．In addition∧the convenient public transportation，our own car can also take them to some nearby places of interest．With fluent English，I'm sure I will have no difficulty communicate with them．Above all，we have hosted two British students last year，through it we've gained lots of experience．What's more，my mother is a good cooker and can guarantee us a wonderful chance of tasting delicious Chinese food．
I would greatly appreciate you if I could have the chance to host them and make friends with them．
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．
解析：
1：family-families．考查名词复数．family为可数名词，在"one of the+n"这一结构中名词应用复数形式，故把family改为families．
2：Locating-Located．考查非谓语动词．locate与主句主语之间为动宾关系，此处应用located作状语，故把Locating改为Located．
3：apartment-apartments．考查名词复数．apartment 是可数名词，所以用复数apartments．
4：In addition 后加to．考查介词．根据语境，此处意思是"除…之外还"，应用In addition to，故In addition 后加to．
5：communicate-communicating．考查非谓语动词．have no difficulty 用doing做宾语，所以用communicating．表示"与某人交流没有困难"．
6：去掉have．考查谓语动词的时态．根据时间状语last year可知，此处应用一般过去时，故把have删去．
7：it-which．考查定语从句的引导词．根据句子结构分析可知，逗号后面为非限制性定语从句，关系代词作through宾语，故把it改为which．
8：cooker-cook．考查单词辨析．本句my mother is a good cooker表示"妈妈是一个好厨师"，所以用cook，而cooker指厨具．
9：us-them．考查代词．根据上下文语境这里表示我母亲超高的厨艺能够给他们一个机会．故把us改为them．修饰food应用形容词形式，故把deliciously改为delicious．
10：you-it．考查代词．appreciate后用it做形式宾语代指I could have the chance to host them and make friends with them．

点评考查短文改错．
it做形式宾语的用法．通常意义的形式宾语主要见于真正宾语为不定式、动名词、从句等且其后跟有宾语补足语时的情形，即用于"动词+it+宾语补足语+真正的宾语"这样的结构，但以下几类形式宾语却比较特殊，其后没有宾语补足语．
1．动词+it+that-从句
I like it that you came．你来了，我很高兴．
I take it （that） he will come on time．我认为他会准时来的．
You can put it that it was arranged before．你可以说这是以前安排的．
Rumor has it that the defence minister will soon resign．据传闻，国防部长不久就要辞职．
【注】能用于此结构的动词不多，常见的有 have，take，put，like 等．（from www．yygrammar．com）
2．动词+it+when （if）-从句
I dislike it when you whistle．我不爱听你吹口哨．
We really appreciate it when she offered to help．她来帮忙了，我们十分感激．
I'd prefer it if I didn't have to do so much work．要是我不必做那么多工作，好就太好了．
【注】能用于此结构的动词不多，常见的有 enjoy，hate，love，like，dislike，appreciate，prefer 等．