题目内容
3.众所周知,勤俭节约是中华民族的优良传统,但根据调查,近几年来中学生每月的花销越来越高,根本没有节俭的概念.请就此现象写一篇 120 字左右的短文,要求如下:
1.简单阐述此现象;
2.分析这一现象的原因;
3.你的看法.
注意:文章开头已给出,不计入词数;
参考词汇:thrift (n.) 勤俭
According to a survey,in recent years monthly expenses of a middle school student have been
on the sharp rise.
分析 这是一篇谈看法的写作.阐述中学生的花销增加,没有勤俭节约的概念的这类现象,分析原因并发表自己的看法.注意观点明确,条理清晰,可以用表顺序的关联词,如first/firstly,second/secondly…then,last but not the least等.时态:用一般现在时.结构上,可以先从材料给的信息入手,逐步深入分析原因.使用一些高级句型和词汇提升作文档次.
【亮点说明】take it for granted,the apple in their family's eyes,From my opinion of view,regardless of,be favorable to等词组使文章更生动;First of all,In addition,Moreover,使文章条理清晰;In addition,with the improvement of living standards,parents can afford higher expenses of their children.使用with的复合结构;We should limit our expenses and not buy whatever we want regardless of their price.whatever引导的宾语从句使文章更有水平.
文章的安排分为三部分,开头部分:开门见山地简单阐述现象.正文部分:分析原因.结尾部分:简要总结,发表自己的观点.
解答 According to a survey,in recent years monthly expenses of a middle school student have been on the sharp rise.Many students have no concept of thrift in their mind.They take it for granted that they spend money from their parents.This phenomenon is mainly caused by the following factors.(开门见山地简单阐述现象)
First of all,nowadays most of the students are the only children of their families.They are the apple in their family's eyes and naturally get more care and pocket money.In addition,with the improvement of living standards,parents can afford higher expenses of their children.Moreover,some students like to pursue fashion.(分析原因)
From my opinion of view,a middle school student,as a pure consumer,should learn to be thrifty.We should limit our expenses and not buy whatever we want regardless of their price.The habit of thrift can help us form right values and is favorable to our future development.(简要总结,发表自己的观点)
点评 写作中一些技巧:
1、审题:审题是做到切题的第一步.所谓审题就是要看清题意,确定文章的中心思想、主题,并围绕中心思想组织材料.
2、进行构思,列出简单的提纲,打造文章之骨架:审好题、立好意后,就要写提纲,打造文章的骨架.文章布局要做好几件事:安排好层次段落,铺设好过渡,处理好开头和结尾.
3、扩展成文:根据字数多少扩展成篇.扩展的内容一定要紧扣主题,千万不要写那些与主题不相关的内容.展开的方式包括:顺序法、举例法、比较法、对比法、说明法、因果法、推导法、归纳法和下定义等.可以根据需要任选一种或几种方式.