题目内容
20.假定你是李华,于2015年3月2日搭乘某航空公司(Flight HZH9211)回国.到机场后,发现遗失了行李箱.现请你用英语给该航空公司写一封信,请他们帮你寻找.要点包括:1)陈述写信原因;2)描述行李箱;3)期待回复并表示感谢.
注意:1)次数100左右; 2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3)开头语和结束语已为你写好,不计入总词数.
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua,and I was a passenger
on Flight HZH9211 of your airline,returning from abroad on March 2nd,2015.Unfortunately,I found that my suitcase got lost when I arrived at the airport.I am therefore writing to ask for your help in finding my suitcaseThe suitcase is a yellow one,80cm long,40cm wide and 25cm thick,with my name attached to the back.It contains many important personal files and some scientific materials.There are also some presents I bought for my family members and friends.It will be a great disappointment to me if I can't find it.
I would greatly appreciate it if you could help find my lost suitcase.I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon..
Regards,
Li Hua.
分析 这是一篇提纲作文,让我们给该航空公司写一封信,请他们帮忙寻找遗失了的行李箱,这需要我们发挥英语思维,将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来.写作需要用第一人称,时态主要是一般过去时,内容要点包括:陈述写信原因;描述行李箱;期待回复并表示感谢.我们此篇作文分为两部分,第一部分为陈述写信原因.第二部分为描述行李箱.第三部分为期待回复并表示感谢.
重点短语与句型:
get lost 不见了,失踪
ask for help 寻求帮助
be attached to 附上,贴上
look forward to 盼望
高分句型一:My name is Li Hua,and I was a passenger on Flight HZH9211 of your airline,returning from abroad on March 2nd,2015.此句用了现在分词短语作伴随状语
高分句型二:The suitcase is a yellow one,80cm long,40cm wide and 25cm thick,with my name attached to the back此句用了with+宾语+宾语补足语
解答 Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua,and I was a passenger on Flight HZH9211 of your airline,returning from abroad on March 2nd,2015.(高分句型一)Unfortunately,I found that my suitcase got lost when I arrived at the airport.I am therefore writing to ask for your help in finding my suitcase.(陈述写信原因)
The suitcase is a yellow one,80cm long,40cm wide and 25cm thick,with my name attached to the back.(高分句型二 )It contains many important personal files and some scientific materials.There are also some presents I bought for my family members and friends.It will be a great disappointment to me if I can't find it.(描述行李箱)
I would greatly appreciate it if you could help find my lost suitcase.I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.(期待回复并表示感谢)
Regards,
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.