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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分

My summer travel started terribly. I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hangzhou. I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday. I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it. Luckily I had all my money on my pocket, but the only clothes I had was those I had on. It felt very strange to travel without any luggages. When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.

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When I found out I was moving to India, it was beyond a nightmare. It was something I couldn’t even imagine. The impression I had of India were only based upon a few summer visits to my grandparents, filled with heat, pollution and dirt. Even though I was only six years old, I know this would be a complete change from my comfortable life in Maryland.

During my first six months in India, my expectations were met almost exactly. I hated my new apartment; I missed my school and friends back in Maryland, and I was sick of all the dirty marketplaces that filled the streets of New Delhi.

After those six months were over I finally realized that I was going to be in India for a while. I knew that I had to start making the most of my new life. It was then that I became completely involved in my school. My school, the American Embassy School, was filled with international students: Europeans, Australians, Chinese, and Americans just like me. But they all welcomed me with open arms. It was amazing to be among such diverse students, who had such incredible experiences to share.

Now, when I look back at my time in India, all I can think about is how fortunate I am to have had such a wonderful experience. My move to India not only allowed me to see a completely different side of the

world, but I was also able to establish unbreakable bonds with so many interesting and amazing people. Even now, after quite some years, I am still in contact with my closest friends from the American Embassy School. I cannot even imagine what I would be like without having lived in India. I would have missed out on meeting so many extraordinary people, and I would be a completely different person today.

1.At the beginning, the author thought it terrible to move to India because he felt__________ .

A. he was too young to go there

B. he couldn’t see his grandparents

C. India was hot and dirty

D. he missed his friends in New Delhi

2.What made the author face his new life?

A. That he needed to make some friends.

B. That he fell in love with his new school.

C. That he missed his motherland.

D. That he had to stay in India longer.

3.After the author returned to Maryland _________

A. he found his life in India worthwhile

B. he hoped to go to India once again

C. he shared his story with his family

D. he wanted to experience another new life

4.What does the author want to tell us about his life in India?

A. It was the hardest time.

B. It changed him a lot.

C. It was comfortable and unforgettable.

D. It made him an interesting man.

Hiking, also walking for a long distance in the countryside is one of life’s simple and cheap pleasures. But is it safe? Sports writer Mark Waters considers the risks.

Imagine the following...

One day, Ronald decided to take up hiking. The next Sunday, he got up early, threw a sandwich and a bottle of water into a bag and headed for Sai Kung Country Park. Before going, he quickly looked at a map and decided that he could easily walk from the bus stop at Park Tam Chung to the beach at Dai Long Wan .

After walking for hours and hours under the hot sun, Ronald started to feel tired. He reached for his water but found that the bottle was empty. Then he smelt smoke and saw a fire. In a panic, he called 999. However, when he got through to the police, he couldn’t tell them where he was because he didn’t have a map...

Think about it...

Put yourself in Ronald’s shoes. How could you stop this of thing happening to you? One way is to know the following common types of danger.

Getting lost

Foggy weather is one reason why some walkers get lost. However, a more common one is not having enough knowledge of the hiking route. Always remember to bring a map and don’t be too confident . Always choose a route that is right for you.

Heat stroke(中暑)

The summer in Hong Kong is very hot and wet. Many hikers forget this and walk for too long in the midday heat. They become hot and feel weak. Don’t forget during exercise, it is necessary to drink 100 to 200 milliliters of water every 15 to 20 minutes.

Accident

Some of Hong Kong’s paths are very hazardous and it’s not unknown for hikers to fall. Never walk alone and always bring a map and a mobile phone with you.

Hill fire

On average, over 10,000 hill fires a year take place in Hong Kong, injuring more than 600 people. Never light fires in non-marked areas and, if you see a hill fire, report it. Always stay calm and walk away from the fire into the wind.

1.What can we learn about Ronald?

A. He loves hiking and hikes regularly.

B. He didn’t bring enough water on his hike.

C. He brought about a map with him on his hike.

D. He couldn’t tell his friends where he saw a fire

2.The passage mentions Ronald .

A. to warn people against hiking alone

B. to tell people hiking is difficult to be popular

C. to show typical mistakes about hiking

D. to remind people to call the police for help

3.What does the underlined word ”hazardous” mean?

A. Long.

B. Narrow.

C. Complex.

D. Dangerous.

4.What is the best title for the text?

A. Hiking Routes in Mountains

B. When Fun Turns into Trouble

C. Hill Fires and How to Avoid Them

D. The Adventures of Ronald the Hiker

We all face quantities of stress in day–to–day living, whether at work, at home, or anywhere in between.1.Here’s how stress can help us on an everyday basis.

Stress can sharpen your memory.2.Remember that test you passed where the answers seemed to come out of nowhere?3.It’s because of stress hormones that increase your alertness when it’s most needed.

Stress also helps you get an advantage at work. Successful employees turn stress into motivation. Have you ever noticed that you get the least amount of work done when you have the fewest deadlines?4.When you take risks and choose to get over the difficulty, it improves your mental toughness and self–confidence.

Stress helps you resist the attack of illness. You need a healthy immune system to help fight off diseases. Believe it or not, the right kind of stress can help your body’s defenses against illness.

5.That burst of stress is helpful to your immune system when your body faces a threat.

Besides, sometimes when you consciously put yourself in stressful situations, stress can make your life more interesting. They can even help you achieve fulfillment and happiness.

A. Did you ever notice that sometimes when you are stressed, you memory seems to improve?

B. When you get sick, stress causes you to make hormones that battle threats to your health.

C. Too little stress can affect how much you actually get done.

D. That’s one way your brain responds to stress.

E. This will surely happen whenever you are stressed.

F. But handled properly, stress can have many benefits for our body and mind.

G. Stress helps you get through difficult times.

Once when I was facing a decision that involved high risk, I went to a friend. He looked at me for a moment, and then wrote a sentence containing the best advice I’ve ever had: Be bold and brave—and mighty(强大的) forces will come to your aid.

Those words made me see clearly that when I had fallen short in the past, it was seldom because I had tried and failed. It was usually because I had let fear of failure stop me from trying at all. On the other hand, whenever I had plunged into deep water, forced by courage or circumstance, I had always been able to swim until I got my feet on the ground again.

Boldness means a decision to bite off more than you are sure you can eat. And there is nothing mysterious about the mighty forces. They are potential powers we possess: energy, skill, sound judgment, creative ideas—even physical strength greater than most of us realize.

Admittedly, those mighty forces are spiritual ones. But they are more important than physical ones. A college classmate of mine, Tim, was an excellent football player, even though he weighed much less than the average player. “In one game I suddenly found myself confronting a huge player, who had nothing but me between him and our goal line,” said Tim. “I was so frightened that I closed my eyes and desperately threw myself at that guy like a bullet(子弹)—and stopped him cold.”

Boldness—a willingness to extend yourself to the extreme—is not one that can be acquired overnight. But it can be taught to children and developed in adults. Confidence builds up. Surely, there will be setbacks(挫折) and disappointments in life; boldness in itself is no guarantee of success. But the person who tries to do something and fails is a lot better off than the person who tries to do nothing and succeeds.

So, always try to live a little bit beyond your abilities—and you’ll find your abilities are greater than you ever dreamed.

1.Why was the author sometimes unable to reach his goal in the past?

A. He faced huge risks. B. He lacked mighty forces.

C. Fear prevented him from trying. D. Failure blocked his way to success.

2.What is the implied meaning of the underlined part?

A. Swallow more than you can digest. B. Act slightly above your abilities.

C. Develop more mysterious powers. D. Learn to make creative decisions.

3.What can be learned from Paragraph 5?

A. Confidence grows more rapidly in adults. B. Trying without success is meaningless.

C. Repeated failure creates a better life. D. Boldness can be gained little by little.

4.What is the author’s purpose in writing this passage?

A. To encourage people to be courageous. B. To advise people to build up physical power.

C. To tell people the ways to guarantee success. D. To recommend people to develop more abilities.

3.根据短文内容,从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项.选项中有两项为多余选项.
How to Become a Scientist
   Here is some advice for students who think they might like to become scientists.
  (36)AOne of the most important things you can do to become a good scientist is practice watching everything carefully.Find a comfortable chair and put it in the middle of your garden or a park.Sit in the chair for thirty minutes or an hour.Watch the insects that fly past or land on the plants.Look at the shapes of leaves and branches.Listen to the sounds of insects.(37)E Use a microscope to look closely at interesting objects.
 Learn everything you can about a topic that interests you.Suppose you'd like to explore flowers by using a microscope.Go to the library and check out some flower books.See what you can find on the Internet.Pick some flowers and carefully taken them apart.(38)FThe more you know about flowers from reading about them and observing them,the more you'll understand when you look at them with a microscope.
 Ask for help from a knowledgeable person.After you've learned everything you can on your own,ask someone else to help with questions you still have.Maybe there's someone at a nearby school or museum who knows about insects,spiders,or something else you'd like to learn about.(39)B
Find a scientist to talk to or find a place where scientific research is being done.If you still want to learn more,you can find a scientist to talk to at a nearby university,or research station.(40)CExplain what you're interested in.Ask if you can schedule a time to visit.Most scientists are happy to talk to students who share their passion for science.

 A.Become an observer.
 B.You may go seek answers from him.
 C.Write a letter or an e-mail message to the scientist.
 D.Research your questions using the Internet or library.
 E.See if you can find a sight or sound that surprises you.
 F.Use a microscope to see how everything fits together.
 G.Being a scientist is time-consuming and mentally demanding.

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