题目内容
5．现在假设你是高一学生Tom，你班在举行一场主题为"什么是幸福？"的讨论．请你根据下列信息，给校报写一封120词左右的英文信，介绍讨论的情况．1.45%学生认为：①幸福就是住大房，生活在大城市 ②身体健康，生活无压力自由自在 ③工作、生活得过且过，不必吃苦
2.55%学生认为：①幸福就是拼搏取得成功 ②保持自信乐观，迎接各种挑战 ③爱家人爱朋友，奉献社会
3．你的看法：（至少两点）
Dear editor，
I'm writing to tell you about
Yours，
Tom．
分析 此书面表达是一篇话题类英文信，要注意书信的格式．假如你是李华，近日，你班正在开展一场主题为"幸福是什么？"的讨论．请你根据下列信息，给校报写一封120词左右的英文信，介绍讨论的情况．按要求把所提示的点写全．写作时要注意准确运用时态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色，注意要求的字数在120词左右，不要太多或太少．写作时避免只用简单句，要合理的运用并列句，甚至复合句．
【亮点说明】I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about what happiness is．此句含有一个定语从句和一个介词的宾语从句；Forty five percent of the students hold the opinion that people are happy when they enjoy their life by living in a spacious house in big cities．在这句中运用了that引导的同位语从句和when引导的时间状语从句；Living a comfortable life and free to do what they like is important to them．此句运用动名词短语作主语，且含有一个what引导的宾语从句；The rest of the students think happiness is hard work，through which people achieved great success．through which在此句中引导非限制性定语从句；In my opinion，happiness depends on what we think about life．depends on后面跟了一个what引导的介词宾语从句；另外，文中还运用了Besides，In their opinion，in good spirits，consider living a comfortable life等高级词汇和短语，为文章增色添彩．
解答 Dear editor，
I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about what happiness is．Happiness means different things to different people．
Forty five percent of the students hold the opinion that people are happy when they enjoy their life by living in a spacious house in big cities．（高分句型一）They hope to enjoy good health and feeling free themselves from stress and pressure．Living a comfortable life and free to do what they like is important to them．Besides，they don't want to suffer a lot from working very hard．The rest of the students think happiness is hard work，through which people achieved great success．（高分句型二）In their opinion，people should be confident，in good spirits and ready to meet all kinds of challenges．
What's more，people should love their family and friends and make contributions to society．We should first work hard and be successful，and then we can consider living a comfortable life．（高分句型三）
Yours，
Tom
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．
