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7．China began relaxing the one-child policy in January 2014，allowing couples to have a second baby if the mother or father was an only child．
The state-run Xinhua news agency reported on Thursday that a move that would thoroughly relax the country's one-child policy that had been eased in recent years would come out sooner or later．
China，now a nation of more than 1.3billion people，practiced a policy of one child per couple to control population growth in the 1970s．The move was viewed as a major liberalization of the three-decades-old restriction．Nationwide，nearly 1million couples eligible（合格的）under the new rules had applied to have a second child，state media reported at the time．Health officials had said that the policy would lead to as many as 2million new births when the policy change was first announced．
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Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
As for myself，I don't subscribe to the new policy and I prefer only-one child policy in that the only one child can enjoy the privilege of being the center of attention and get all the love and care of their parents．
至于我自己，我不赞成新政策和我更喜欢的只有一个孩子的政策，只有一个孩子能享受被关注的中心的特权和得到父母所有的爱和关心．
高分句型二：
Furthermore，many children also complain about loneliness for lack of companions and numerous facts have revealed that selfishness and indifference have been two traits in the character of today's only child．
此外，许多孩子还抱怨缺乏同伴和无数的事实孤独已经透露，自私和冷漠已经在今天的独生子女性格的两大特点．

解答 反对：
     The above description shows us that the new policy that a second child can be allowed in every family will be expected to benefit the current population structure of China．
     As for myself，I don't subscribe to the new policy and I prefer only-one child policy in that the only one child can enjoy the privilege of being the center of attention and get all the love and care of their parents（高分句型一）．Besides，because of lack of mutual help and because the parents can not be with the child all the time，the only one child is likely to develop an independent character that will enable him or her to be successful more easily in society．What's more，it'll be a heavy burden not only economically but physically both to young parents and other family members．
     In conclusion，it's a great challenge for young parents to welcome the second child．
赞成：
     The above description indicates that the new policy that a second child can be allowed in every family will be expected to benefit the current population structure of China．
     On a personal note，I do welcome the new policy in that in most only-one child families，the child is the center of the whole family，as a result of which，parents often spoil the child by letting the child indulge in materialistic life．Furthermore，many children also complain about loneliness for lack of companions and numerous facts have revealed that selfishness and indifference have been two traits in the character of today's only child（高分句型二）．
    What's more，the new policy is beneficial to both parents and their child．For one thing，parents will be sure to take more responsibility to support the family，which will contribute to a more harmonious society．For another，children can learn more about giving and sharing，which consists with our social morality．
    To conclude，I am quite in favor of the new policy．

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