题目内容
3.假设你是李华.请根据写作要点用英语写一篇周记,记述你周末或在假期中帮助家人做家务的一次经历.写作要点:1.做家务的理由;2.做家务的过程;3.你的感受.
注意:1.词数不少于100 字;2.开头已给不计入总词数;3.不可写真实姓名.注意时态.
I am an 18-year-old middle school student.
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分析 高分句型:
句型一:
Feeling quite sorry for that(1),I begin to think about what to do (2)to help.因为为此感到遗憾,我开始考虑帮助做些什么.
(1)feeling quite sorry for that为现在分词做原因状语,书面表达中的分词做状语总是高分句型.
(2)what to do为"疑问词+to do"在句中做介词about的宾语,相当于一个名词性从句,为简洁的表达方式.
句型二:
a good idea occurred to me (1)why not give (2)the rooms a thorough cleaning.我突然想到一个主意:何不把房间彻底打扫一下呢?
(1)a good idea occurred to sb.某人突然想到…
(2)why not …何不…,常常用来提出建议,本题中为说明idea的内容的同位语.
句型三:
Tired as I was,I never felt so happy.虽然累,我从未如此开心过.
as 表示"虽然",引导让步状语从句,必须要倒装语序,将表语、谓语动词中的实意动词或做状语的副词提到句首;本句中是将做表语的tired 提到句首;倒装也是书面表达中常见的高级句型.
解答 I am an 18-year old middle school student.I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with the housework.Feeling quite sorry for that,I begin to think about what to do to help【高分句型一】.(做家务的理由)
Last Sunday,when my parents went out shopping,a good idea occurred to me why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning【高分句型二】?Firstly I collected all the books,newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place.Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture.After that,I swept and mopped the floors.(做家务的过程)
At this very moment,my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy and floors shining.My mother gave me a hug and I could see satisfaction in her eyes.Tired as I was,I never felt so happy【高分句型三】.(我的感受)
点评 写作时首先审题要到位:审体裁、人称和时态;审要点.其次要考虑高分词语和句型的选用,从句、非谓语动词、倒装、强调句型等都是可考虑的高级句型;词语和句型的选用要包含作者的感情色彩和增强表达的气势;再次,运用关联词如besides、what's more、moreover、for one thing …for another等,使文字更加流畅.
A. | nor will Mary | B. | and Mary doesn't | ||
C. | Mary will either | D. | or Mary does |