Question

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如果你有很多钱，你会用这些钱来做什么？请根据所给的提示单词和词组，以If I have a lot of money 为题写一篇不少于80词的短文。

提示单词和词组：

a big house, parents, a happy life, help, poor children, go to school, get education, give, old people’s homes, plant more trees and flowers, city, more beautiful.

If I have a lot of money

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Answer 1

If I Have a Lot of Money

If I have a lot of money. I will have a big house. My parents and I will have a happy life.I will give money to charities to help poor children go to schools and get a good education. I will also give money to old people.Then I can make their life better. But it's the most important to help our city. I am going to ask other people and I plant trees and flowers. Finally,our city must be more beautiful.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文给出了一些要点。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般将来时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文多次使用连接词but、also，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.

考点：话题作文。