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根据中英文提示，以“My Hometown”为题，写一篇意思连贯，符合逻辑，字数不少于60词的英文作文

提示：1.介绍家乡莱芜。人口一百多万，四分之三的人住在农村。有许多美丽的景点。

近十年来，莱芜发生了巨大变化，建起了许多高楼，修建了许多公路，道路更宽更干净，家庭轿车越来越多。城内出现了堵车，空气越来越糟。

2.做一名文明初中生，尽量步行或乘公交上学，既利于交通又利于健康，努力使我们的城市越来越好。

提示词: Xueye Lake, Laiwu Campaign Memorial (莱芜战役纪念馆); Fanggan Tourist Area (房干旅游区) , traffic(交通), change, new buildings, obey, rules, be friendly to,

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Answer 1

Laiwu is my hometown. It has a population of about one million. 3/4 of the population live in rural areas. There are many beautiful scenic spots here.

In the past ten years, great changes have taken place in Laiwu. Many tall buildings and roads have been built. The roads are wider and cleaner. More and more families have cars. There are often traffic jams in the city. And the air is getting worse and worse.

To be good middle school students, we should try to walk or take the bus to school. It is good not only for the traffic but also for our health. Let’s do our best to make our city better and better.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文要求以“My Hometown”为题，写一篇英语短文。在题目中给了我们这篇短文的写作内容: 1.介绍家乡莱芜。人口一百多万，四分之三的人住在农村。有许多美丽的景点。近十年来，莱芜发生了巨大变化，建起了许多高楼，修建了许多公路，道路更宽更干净，家庭轿车越来越多。城内出现了堵车，空气越来越糟。 2.做一名文明初中生，尽量步行或乘公交上学，既利于交通又利于健康，努力使我们的城市越来越好。主要内容虽然已经列好，但是很多内容都需要我们自己去充实，让它变得完整、合理，内容丰富，这就需要花费我们的想象力，以及我们平时积累的知识。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者根据提示内容，介绍了家乡莱芜并说明要做一名文明的初中生，层次非常的清晰。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如 It is good not only for the traffic but also for our health. Let’s do our best to make our city better and better.等。

考点：话题类作文。