Question

12．从今年三月起，全国各地都在积极开展"学雷锋"活动．你了解雷锋吗？请谈谈你的看法和今后的打算．
1谈谈你所了解的雷锋．
2你将来的打算：
A．努力学习．
B．送书，帮助贫困孩子．
C．周末看望老人．
D．在家帮父母做家务．
注意：
（1）词数60-80个左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数．
（2）覆盖所有要点；可适当发挥，增加细节，以使行文连贯．
        The Spirit of Lifeng
  The people all over China are learning from Leifengnow．He is the great example to all of us．He was always ready to help others and never asked for anything．So he became the spirit of Chinese people．
As a student of the 21^st century，we should learn from him and try to help others．But what should we do？First，we should study hard so that we can have more abilities to help others．Second，we could help the children．Give them books，warm clothes，raise money for charities and so on．And on weekends，we can visit old people，spend time with them and help them as much as possible．Finally，we should help our parents with housework at home．Because parents are often tired of hard work．
Lei Feng has gone，but we can be new Lei Fengs．Whenever and wherever，we can show our kindness．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容谈谈对学雷锋活动的看法．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从两个大的方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1谈谈你所了解的雷锋．
2你将来的打算：其中还有四小点
A．努力学习．
B．送书，帮助贫困孩子．
C．周末看望老人．
D．在家帮父母做家务．
常用到的重点短语：
learn from sb向谁学习．
be ready to do sth准备好做某事
try to do sth尽力做某事
and so on等等
spend 时间with sb和某人一起度过
as…as possible尽可能的…
help sb with sth帮助某人做某事
高分句型：
First，we should study hard so that we can have more abilities to help others．
本句中的so that引导的目的状语从句．并且 to help others动词不定式作为后置定语．
Whenever and wherever，we can show our kindness．
句中Whenever and wherever表示无论何时何地，做句子的状语．

解答 The Spirit of Lei Feng
The people all over China are learning from Lei Feng now．He is the great example to all of us．He was always ready to help others and never asked for anything．So he became the spirit of Chinese people．（我所了解的雷锋）
As a student of the 21^st century，we should learn from him and try to help others．But what should we do？First，we should study hard so that we can have more abilities to help others．（高分句型）（努力学习）Second，we could help the children．Give them books，warm clothes，raise money for charities and so on（送书，帮助贫困孩子．）．And on weekends，we can visit old people，spend time with them and help them as much as possible（周末看望老人）．Finally，we should help our parents with housework at home．Because parents are often tired of hard work．（在家帮父母做家务）
Lei Feng has gone，but we can be new Lei Fengs．Whenever and wherever，we can show our kindness．（高分句型）（发出号召）

点评 本篇作文由于提纲材料本身决定了写作对象、范围、目的、体裁等，命题者的意图往往较容易领悟，考生在审题上一般不会出现障碍．可根据内容要点提示运用相关的句型结构灵活的展开作文．考生需注意不要逐词逐句地进行翻译，所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯．