Question

假设你将参加社区“英语角”，本期话题是My Good Friend，请根据提示内容，写一篇90词左右的短文，根据要点要进行适当发挥，注意句意连贯。注意文中不得出现真实人名、校名等。

Personalities	Confident	not afraid of … / …
Clever	new ideas…
Hard-working	do extra work / …
Problem	like …best; not achieve a balance between…
Hero	favorite color; a heart full of love / …

My Good Friend

Answer 1

My Good Friend

Mary is my best friend. She is thirteen. She is a very confident girl because she is not afraid of anything.and she is very clever ,for she always thinks of new ideas to ；s when we have difficulty in our everyday life.

Besides, she is quite hardworking. She often works extra hours while others are playing. Her favourite lessons are English and math. She likes them best. She also likes drawing and reading after school.but she can’t achieve a balance between study and rest, so she is a little weak. However, her hero is Hawking,a famous scientist. she says she will be a scientist when she grows up. What’s more, she likes green because she has a heart full of love for nature, and she wants to work to protect many plants and animals on the earth.

This is my friend, Mary.

【解析】

试题分析： 本文要求学生运用所学英语知识，来介绍自己的好朋友。分别介绍他的性格，问题和 他最崇拜的英雄三个方面。

【亮点说明】该文完全能够依照题目要求，从三个方面着手介绍自己的好朋友。并且语言流畅，用词准确，思路清晰，语句连贯，不失为一篇优秀作文。特别是使用 主从复合句这样的长句实属可贵。例如：She is a very confident girl because she is not afraid of anything。for she always thinks of new ideas to solve problems when we have difficulty in our everyday life.文章中的连接副词也使用得相当不错：Besides, However, What’s more,等。以及一些漂亮的短语：not afraid of；thinks of；solve problem；have difficulty in；works extra hours achieve a balance between study and rest；grows up.