Question

在你成长的过程中， 你认识了许许多多的人。请以“A person I will never forget”为题，写一篇英语短文。要求如下：

1. 短文内容必须包括：General appearance(外貌)

Hobby

Personality(性格)

The reasons that you will never forget him/her

2. 短文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。

3. 词数80左右。文章开头已给出(开头的句子不计入总词数)。

A person I will never forget

The person I’ll never forget is

Answer 1

A person I will never forget

The person I’ll never forget is my English teacher. He is a tall man with thick glasses. He likes sports and often plays football and basketball with us.

He is humorous and always makes his classes lively and interesting. He’s kind but is strict with us. He never allows us to pretend that we know what we don’t know. He often tells us that it’s no use memorizing new words without understanding.

I was not good at English at the beginning. He often helps me and is patient enough to explain the difficulties to me. With his help, my English has been greatly improved.

My English teacher is the best teacher that I have ever met. I will never forget him.

【解析】

这是一篇提纲类作文，介绍一位自己难忘的人。本题给出了写作提纲，动笔前要先认真阅读写作要点，然后围绕写作要点展开写作。根据所给材料内容，可知本文主要用一般现在时态进行叙述。写作中注意语言的表述应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。给出的要点都要写到文章中。

【亮点说明】1. 本文紧扣要求对自己难忘的人做了介绍，内容完整。2. 句式丰富。有最高级：My English teacher is the best teacher that I have ever met.有定语从句：The person I’ll never forget is my English teacher.