Question

【题目】 书面表达（本题20分）根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。

根据图片内容，以My Room为题来介绍你的房间（至少介绍房间五项物品及其位置）。注意行文逻辑清晰，字迹工整。字数要求：50词左右。

My Room

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Answer 1

【答案】

【参考范文】

My Room

This is my room. It’s a nice room. There is a window in the wall, and a desk next to the window. There are some pictures on the wall. Some books and a pencil box are on the desk. I have a big bed and there is a cap on my bed. Where is my schoolbag? Oh, it is on the floor next to my bed. I often clean my room. I like my room very much.

【名师点评】

本篇书面表达要求根据图片内容写一篇短文，介绍自己的房间。需要整合信息，并适当发挥。首先，要认真审题，掌握图片中的信息，需要描述至少五件物品。然后整体把握写作的大致方向，谋篇布局。写作中注意顺序，注意上下文的过度，符合逻辑关系。

【写作亮点】

本文行文流畅，语言规范。文章层次清晰，表述分明，使用了很多句型和短语：＂like…very much, clean the room, next to＂＂I have a big bed and there is a cap on my bed.＂以及活泼的疑问句，自问自答＂Where is my schoolbag? Oh, it is on the floor next to my bed＂的使用，丰富了文章的内容，为文章增色不少。

【解析】略